Good start! I don't like the outfit. We sell luxury women dresses. The way she is dressed is not suitable for our brand. I'll attach a picture of how she should be dressed? The back ground in front is not suitable, look at our logo try same background. Good start
thanks for the quick response, this sketch is one of my old sketches but i could alter and re design this for you digitally,, so you want a whole body? does she need to show face? i could also change the outfit into a dress or something inspired by your brand.