Good morning and Namaste.
I can see you want someone to write a love story for your novel. What is your novel about? How many stories is it going to contain?
I am thinking of a fictional tragedy of a high school girl, who falls in love with a seemingly ordinary boy in her class. But as the story progresses, we find something odd about him. Something unnatural. The way he looks at everyone, the way he tries to isolate himself. In 6 chapters, we try to figure out exactly what kind of guy is he, and will it heroine we able to ask him out. Only in the penultimate chapter, do we find that he is the son of a kidnapper, and been taught since childhood how to life kids.
Do you think it will captivate the audience with awe, and surprise, and butterflies? Do tell me where you think the story needs improvement.
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Thank you.