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Enviromental Poster Revision

Hey man!, here's the revision. I felt that plain white text suited it the most :)

Contest Entry #10 for                                                 Design a Business Environmental Poster/Board

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  • elestero
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    I think the logo should be at the top and end the bottom part with the copyrights text. Thanks!

    • 9 years ago
  • elestero
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Thanks for the fast response. Hey, while you're making some revisions, can I add a few more?

    Here they are:
    1) The last sentence under Saving Monterey Bay (Cigarette receptacles......and pedestrians), can you make that fit in one line.
    2) Can you add colons after "Recent Water Savings Improvements" and "Leak Prevention".
    3) Can you remove the spaces between the bullets under Energy Conservation and Recycling Improvements. I think this will give you room at the bottom and even get rid of the dark area at the bottom of the picture (that is still inside the frame). There just seems to be a lot of unwanted black space in the photo.

    Looking forward to the revision and what the owner will say. Thank you!

    • 9 years ago
  • drawnsean
    drawnsean
    • 9 years ago

    No problem!, I'll make these changes now :)

    • 9 years ago
  • elestero
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Thank you for revising. Can you incorporate the logo at the top center. And can you change the title to ENVIRONMENTAL MEASURES.

    I will review all entries with the business owner in a couple of days and will decide from then who will be awarded. Thank you for all the effort.

    • 9 years ago