Re Write and edit my resume

  • Status: Closed
  • Prize: $70
  • Entries Received: 11
  • Winner: riputandon

Contest Brief

Changes Needed to be made: Make everything look more simple

Proof Read it all. Create better paragraphs but bases are already there on old resumes.
My name starts with an i not an L
Instead of Boch Honda/ Nissan we should just write “Boch Auto Group” and mention that as a director I was heavily overseen both Honda and the Nissan store as I was transferred in within as needed.
All three jobs I had at Bernardi dealerships should be just under “ Bernardi Auto Group” and state nicely How i started as an internet sales manager at Audi store and made my way up to be a sales manager at their Toyota location and then a Finance Manager at the Audi store. Went through 2 steps of promotion.
Goal is to make it short and neat and solidify longevity at jobs.
Ownership of Champion city should not be on the time line but should be on the very bottom as “ Owned a pre - owned high line store, as well as F&I consulting firm that is still very profitable by service over 20 independent dealerships in South Shore area of Massachusetts.
Change adress noted to * 950 Brickell Bay Dr, Brickell, Miami 33131


Finance director

Summary

Innovative professional with 8 years of progressive experience within the automobile sales industry and the skills
to drive business growth, capitalize on new revenue potential, and manage all aspects of daily business operations.

Expertise in new and used vehicle sales, pricing strategies, client relations and needs assessment, marketing, financialmanagement, purchasing, administration, and staff training, supervision, motivation and mentoring
.
Proactive leader with refined business acumen and exemplary people skills. Facilitate a team
approach to achieve organizational objectives, increase productivity and enhance employee morale.

Quick study, with an ability to easily grasp and put into application new ideas, concepts, methods
and technologies. Dedicated, innovative and self-motivated team player/builder.

Proficient in the use of various computer programs and applications.

Fluent in three languages: English, Russian and Georgian.

Objectives:

An Automotive Management position that will effectively utilize acquired expertise, creative talents and commitment toexcellence. Desire a position with career growth potential.

Education:

Tbilisi State University, Tbilisi, Georgia Business Organization, Graduated May 2014

A. 29 Louise Rd, Newton, MA USA 02467 E. [login to view URL]@[login to view URL] P.617-640-7632

Languages: English, Russian and Georgian.

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