Rewrite this script for a medical ad
- Status: Closed
- Prize: $100
- Entries Received: 8
- Winner: WeaselWorks
Contest Brief
Need assistance with RE-WRITING this script as it currently reads as a “sales” pitch and not something specific to a patient journey for our virtual (or decentralized) service.
The script that was drafted by our current writer sounds too sales-y, and specifically around the utility of decentralized virtual trials. From the current script (attached) we would not just want them to just focus on virtual trials but also clinical trials in general. From a patient perspective, I don’t know how much they would even assume at this point a trial means you go into a site given that they would have gotten care via remote during the whole pandemic
- Also, we aren’t selling a DCT service, which is how the text (from the attached script) sounds, but rather trying to get them involved in the trial with the bonus that it can be from the comfort of their own home
The new script should take the following in consideration.
A flow could look like:
1. Explain the purpose of the trial (some more detailed version of “we are trying to understand how a new candidate antidepressant medication works, and for whom it works best”) without over-promising or precision-type language. It takes place in your home with support from Our study staff through virtual visits.
2. Participation in the trials (at a high level) involves X, Y, Z with the benefit to you (the patient) being opportunity to benefit clinically from the treatment, as well as advance innovation in this type of indication so that we can understand who best responds to the drug
3. The drug itself has been in clinical trials previously with side effects no different from placebo (and then whatever language but at a high level we have on this in the consent). A physician will oversee the prescription and monitoring of the medication.
4. If you qualify for the study, the drug will be given in addition to whatever you are currently taking
5. You will go through the following procedures (interview with a clinician, answer questionnaires on your history and symptoms, do certain procedures that would help us determine the best treatment specific to you! behavioral tests, use a wearable, provide a laboratory sample for clinical laboratory assessments get blood drawn for labs, monitor your BP/HR at home). All of these (apart from the blood draw) are done from the comfort of your home. And then flesh each of these out a bit so they understand what’s involved but also ensure that all of this is paid by us and nothing coming out of their pocket! All free!
6. Participation will require X hrs on Y days spread over the 9 weeks of study duration.
7. You will also be paid $$ for the time it takes to participate in the study
8. Click yes if you are interested in taking part, want to learn more about participation, and commit to having the time required to complete all of the study components. They can then directly book into a calendar to schedule a call with a study coordinator. Also give the option to say no this is not for me right now but I would like to be considered for other studies conducted by us!
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