Hello, Yes, it is missing something! I am a PowerPoint specialist; both back end and front end. Many jobs involve updating tired decks and make them more current by ‘banishing the bullets’ and introducing more visuals to share the message. I am particularly fond of this type of work. I have a very strong business background. These combined strengths permit me to identify the touch-points of your business - those details that need to be shared with your audience.
I will start by touching up your Master Slide Deck, and you will then have long term benefits beyond this current presentation. You will have a Cover, title, section and thank you slide in addition to at least 15 branded (circa 2015) layouts for you to choose from in the future. I will also include 200+ icons – also branded. Static elements will be embedded, no jumping of Titles etc. Insert a table, graph, SmartArt in the future? Auto branded with your prime color. Robust.
Then, I will focus on updating your presentation with the content supplied per your suggestion. I have an impressive toolkit of infographics (your illustrations included) and icons ready to visually enhance your message. I will apply a suitable slide transition and add animation to particular slides, when it assists in the delivery.
This is a big job, I have bid to your max plus freelancer fee to reflect my input. My presentations are for Showing, while you do the Telling; your audience will not read along with you. Cheers, Wendy