319828 Need Press Release Changes

Hello, Her is the press release and the changes that are required are below the press realease. A new logo design company, [login to view URL] is becoming a trendsetter when it comes to logo design companies. Having the ability to reach out to their community of thousands of talented designers offering prize money for the best design gives clients the ability to choose from 35 to 250+ design concepts giving the best possible design for their business. Crowdsourcing works simply by reaching out to an existing community asking for help with a task that you might have, I'm sure you have heard the old saying two heads are better than one, well how about 5000 heads are better than one. In my opinion crowdsourcing is the only way to get unique, creative ideas when needing design work such as Logos designs, T-shirt designs, business card designs, Print ads, Twitter Backgrounds or whatever your design needs might be. Logomyway allows any business to start a design contest at just $200, there is not a business with a good excuse as to why they don't have a uniquely designed logo to represent their company. When using Logomyway, clients will see design concepts submitted within hours not weeks. Clients can run contests anywhere from 5 to 14 days, after deciding which logo design best fits their company they simply select that logo as the prize winner and the designer will then upload all the required design files so the client can download them and start using them. The great thing about dealing with Logomyway is that clients have the ability to choose from many designs from thousands of creative minds all over the world. Traditional companies will deliver maybe 3 to 6 design concepts making you to choose a design that most likely is not what you were looking for. If your business needs a fresh new logo design , then you need to considered Logomyway for Logos designs, T-shirts designs, Print ad designs and Business card designs . With our struggling economy it's important for your business to stay ahead and think of ways to stand out. A unique creative logo will set your company apart from your competitors and you will receive much more in benefits than what it cost you. ### changes asked by [login to view URL] 1. Press releases are required to be written in journalistic style. This means, in part, that it: A) should not be written in 1st person (e.g., "We did xyz"), but rather should be 3rd person (e.g., "Company ABC did xyz"), and B) it should not contain direct address (e.g., "You can do xyz"), but rather should be with no direct address (e.g., "Clients can do xyz"). So, you should not use the words "you," "we," "I," "our," and "us" outside of a quoted statement, as this is a flag that the content is an advertisement rather than a press release. Also, these words are not search terms, but your company, product or service names are. Please adjust accordingly. 2. This commnet refers to the text in the Summary Section: Your press release contains grammatical errors. Please proofread it, use a spell check program and be sure it is written in well-formed English grammar and structure.