Need a literary critique and suggestions

In a successful children's story, every word counts. Every comma counts. Every image counts. Every ounce of lyricism counts. Every real emotion counts (you can't fool kids for long). Every creatively expressed nod to what makes us all human counts. Put them all together, and you have a magical reading experience. Have you done that in your book? Let me sensitively sift your sentences through my sieve of sensibility and let's find out.

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Good morning, I am a former journalist and marketing specialist with more than fifteen years of experience writing, editing and proofreading. As a freelancer, I have edited the gamut of material, from academic papers to cookbooks, as well as an extensive range of genres, from non-fiction to contemporary and young adult fiction. I particularly love going through children's books. Not only do I have five children of my own, but I am also in the process of writing a children's series for ages 4-6. It's a challenge to put a story in concise terms that a child this age can understand; however, it's an amazing experience. I would love the opportunity to give you an honest, well-thought review with any applicable suggestions. Please feel free to let me know if you have any questions or would like to see any examples of my editing. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration, Mariah Patterson

I would be thrilled to help you with this. I have ten years experience as a college professor proofing and grading hundreds of research papers (usually 5-8 pages apiece) and essays. I also have experience writing many masters papers and essays of my own. I will look at this with a teacher's perspective, giving attention to detail, clarity, syntax, grammar, spelling and punctuation. I will also correct passive constructions and change linking verbs to active whenever possible. I also am a husband and the father of five young children. My wife is a children's book buff. Most recently, I provided proofreading and edits for a children's poetry author.

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M.A. Writing Thesis published, in university library. Books published in universities and libraries. Only work to milestones. I'm really good at writing literary analysis, my thesis was an analysis of texts, of classical texts and my own stories. Interested in philosophy and psychology. Children's book in State Library of New South Wales.

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Hi, I'm an Australian native English language speaker and happen to be a Literature graduate. I have worked with a children's storybook writer previously and have 3 children myself. I read children's books daily with my children and understand what makes a story tick for little ones. I also have extensive editing experience and will be able to give you a one page critique which will include suggestions of improvement. I look forward to working with you.

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I'm actually a reading and writing tutor for two children, and have also worked in a preschool before. I've taken early childhood education courses, and have an excellent skill set for this project. Aside from my expertise in relation to children and reading material, I'm also very skilled in review and edit service providing. I'll do a full review of your book, take notes, and put all information I've taken down into a document for you to have and analyze.

I have a background in writing for news, but I also enjoy working on creative writing projects when I can. I know my talent for writing effective news copy could be an asset to your work on a children's book, and I hope we get the chance to work together. I could give you a straightforward, honest critique of your writing and have it done quickly. Hope we can work together soon!

I am a graduate student pursuing a Master's degree in English and I teach English at a local community college. Additionally, I am a professional musician with more than twenty years experience performing, writing and producing music, and composing lyrics. I am also an active reader and I worked with young adults and children for many years as a tutor and music instructor. I believe that I can provide you with an effective analysis of your children's book as well as suggestions on ways to make improvements.