english text STYLIST needed

Hello, I need someone to critics, correct, and make better looking my page at: [login to view URL], the style must be better, more professional, classical, in a good marketing way. Right now it looks a little bit satirical and comic. I need something higher than this, more litterature or very good enlgish and sound speaking, that means something logic. I need a good correction on the style. If you can add your intellect to it, it would be appreciated. I dont want to work or pay someone not talented in english litterature. I need a professional. I want to pay 10$ for this small text. I pay with paypal or with freelancer. When I select you as a winner, we need to cancel the project, so that I can get back my 5$ refundable fee. You need to agree and you need to do this.